Thoughts on Junkosreich?

I've been writing it for a long time, mostly to entertain myself, but sometimes I've wondered what the three people who are paying attention to it think of my writing? Any helpful feedback (preferably sugarcoated to diabetes inducing levels) would be appreciated.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/48500788/chapters/122340298

so uh here's the link, and it's like danganronpa but also dune.